Some people believe that the activities of a large multinational corporations mostly benefit the economies of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, one of the widely discussed issues is
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actions of huge global
companies
are beneficial to countries with developing economies,
while
others believe that these
companies
have
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effect on the indigenous population of a country. Personally, I intend to consider that
although
multinational
companies
have some harmful impacts,
overall
they bring revenue to a
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wider economy in which they do business. A growing body of research suggests that multinationals have a generally positive effect on
economies
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the economies
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of developing countries. It is undeniable that globalization has become an integral part of our
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lives
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,
for
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reason
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international investment can help to create job opportunities for local people.
This
can lead to acclivity in the number of wages and
also
the declivity in the rate of unemployment. Taking Turkey as an example, employees of multinational
companies
earn around 15% more than staff of local
companies
.
On the other hand
, there are
also
negative impacts which must be considered. One important issue is that multinational
companies
can take customers from local
companies
.
This
means that some local businesses are likely to close down because of international corporations. A good
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point is global chains
such
as McDonalds and Coca-Cola have a much larger budget for advertising, allowing them to increase their market share at the expense of local restaurants. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would suggest that multinationals can profit
developing
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from developing
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countries
through
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creating jobs,
they
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but they
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can
also
threaten small
business
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businesses
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. In my opinion, despite having some negative
effect
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effects
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, I strongly believe that multinational corporations are generally beneficial.

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  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
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