Some people believe that the activities of a large multinational corporations mostly benefit the economies of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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actions of huge global

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are beneficial to countries with developing economies,

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others believe that these

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have

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effect on the indigenous population of a country. Personally, I intend to consider that

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multinational

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have some harmful impacts,

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they bring revenue to a

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wider economy in which they do business. A growing body of research suggests that multinationals have a generally positive effect on

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the economies

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of developing countries. It is undeniable that globalization has become an integral part of our

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international investment can help to create job opportunities for local people.

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can lead to acclivity in the number of wages and

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the declivity in the rate of unemployment. Taking Turkey as an example, employees of multinational

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earn around 15% more than staff of local

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, there are

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negative impacts which must be considered. One important issue is that multinational

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can take customers from local

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means that some local businesses are likely to close down because of international corporations. A good

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point is global chains

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as McDonalds and Coca-Cola have a much larger budget for advertising, allowing them to increase their market share at the expense of local restaurants. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would suggest that multinationals can profit

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countries

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creating jobs,

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threaten small

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businesses

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. In my opinion, despite having some negative

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effects

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, I strongly believe that multinational corporations are generally beneficial.