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Monthly sales of Drinks at small café Sales of Drinks January February March April Ice Drinks 150 150 190 230 Tea and Coffee 250 270 220 180 Juices 200 190 210 200 Cocktails 90 90 110 100

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The given table illustrates the figures of various
drinks which
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drinks, which
 were bought by costumers for four months at
small cafe
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a small cafe
. Overall, as can be noticed the need of people is for mainly five drinks,
in particular
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 ice drinks, tea and coffee
,
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,
 Juices and cocktails.
Also
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 the amount of these
drinks consuming
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drinks, consuming
by
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of
 people is different the given period. It is not surprising that people usually don't consume ice drinks
(
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(
150) in
cold months whereas
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the cold months, whereas
the cold months whereas
 they prefer tea and coffee (250- 270)
.
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.
 As
far
appropriate to; intended for
for
 Juices people drink 200 and 190 in January and February and cocktails’ amount performs remarkably lower than Juices
(
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(
90) In spring these numbers change a bit. Consuming ice drinks
by
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from
 people rises. It demonstrates 190 in March and in April it reach 230. Whereas the demand of people for tea and coffee plummet at 220 and 180. With respect to juice and cocktails there is not noticeable change. In general, it is possible to summarize that there are different rates of these four drinks consuming
by
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of
 people in different months. It changes according to
weather
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the weather
.

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