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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #job #satisfaction #security
There is no doubt, that there are two different types of jobs, the
first
 Is
job
satisfaction
 which means profession which gives pleasure and does not threaten human health and even more so his life. The other type is
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a job
the job
hich stands for permanent and li
fe-long e
continuing through life
lifelong
mployment. It is considerably by some, that
satisfaction
 from wo
rkplace i
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the workplace
s imperative, while other mass of people think that security of
job
 is more vital. On the one hand, it is undoubted that having permanent jobs is very beneficial. At
first
, these jobs are conductive people to have a stable life since they have financial support every month.
For example
, in
this
 case people with stable monthly income ,
c
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,
an reckon on their expenses on social and domestic issues accurately, which is very convenient for them. The
next
 plus ,
wh
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,
en people don’t care much about fi
nancials p
involving financial matters
financial
finances
roblems, they can enjoy life easily,
for example
 ,
t
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,
aking up new hobbies as playing tennis or bowling or they
also
 can spend
this
 time by watching some interesting movie or reading a book ,
wh
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,
ich once wanted to read.
On the other hand
 ,
I
Accept space
,
think that
job
satisfaction
 is much more significant .
I
Accept space
.
think so, because of the fact about human provided interest. People can definitely give their energy to things they are doing. By doing so, they are inclined to come up with new ideas and cr
eative ,
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creativity
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,
hich may greatly contribute to the growth of productivity in their work. To
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In
onclusion ,
I
Accept space
,
think that
although
 having pe
rmanents j
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permanent
obs is convenient, gaining
satisfaction
 and fulfilment on what we are doing is more important.
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