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Monthly sales of Drinks at small café Sales of Drinks January February March April Ice Drinks 150 150 190 230 Tea and Coffee 250 270 220 180 Juices 200 190 210 200 Cocktails 90 90 110 100

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The supplied table gives information about monthly sales of various drinks at a small cafe from January to April months.
Overall it
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Overall, it
 can be seen from the table that
,
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,
 the sale range in terms of all of the drinks was the highest in April compared to the other months and people more preferred to drink tea and
coffee
 rather than the remaining types of drinks during the given period. The sale starts
on
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in
 January with
revenue
 150 dollars for the
ice
 drinks and 250$ for tea and
coffee
 which is more than about 40% of
revenue
 realised during the month. In January the cocktails
revenue
 seems to be showing a declining trend with $ 90. While in February the figure for
revenue
 of
ice
 drinks and cocktails remained the same with 150$ and 90$ respectively. We can observe a slight increase in tea and
coffee
 sales by 20$.
On the other hand
revenue
 during March did not experience a significant change.
Juice
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The juice
 was
favored
preferred above all others and treated with partiality
favoured
 by the majority of people with the highest rate, 210$. Showing an increase on March
ice
 drinks rose to 190$. Looking at April, the figure for the
revenue
 of
ice
 drinks hit the highest point with 230$, whereas the sale of cocktail drinks were approximately halved (100$) comparing with
ice
 drinks. Tea and
coffee
was
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were
 drunk a bit fewer with the
revenue
 180$ rather than other months.
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