The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
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At the first stage
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in the life cycle of a silkworm, the moth lays its eggs. Around ten days later, silkworm larvae hatch from the eggs; these larvae feed on mulberry leaves.
Then
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, after four to six weeks, the larvae become covered in
silk
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thread
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, and it takes between three and eight days for a full cocoon to be produced. For
silk
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cloth production, a cocoon is first selected and
then
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boiled in water. After boiling, the
silk
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thread
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that makes up the cocoon is unwound, and
then
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several strands of
thread
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are twisted together. At the fifth and sixth stages in the process, the
thread
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can either be dyed and
then
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woven into
silk
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fabric, or it can be woven first and
then
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dyed
subsequently
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words silk, thread with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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