The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
The pie graphs illustrate the result of a survey of
children
Change noun form
children's
activities
.
The first graph illustrates the cultural and leisure Use synonyms
activities
that Use synonyms
boys
participate in, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
second
graph illustrates the Linking Words
activities
in which Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
girls
participate.
The two graphs have an enormous difference between the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
girls
and boy's Change noun form
girl's
girls'
activities
, one massive difference is in reading, Use synonyms
girls
tend to read more often than Use synonyms
boys
Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
girls
neither Use synonyms
play
basketball nor soccer Change the verb form
plays
while
it occupies 43% of Linking Words
Use synonyms
boys
Change noun form
boys'
boy's
activities
, Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
boys
do not dance nor play netball Use synonyms
while
42% of Linking Words
girls
Use synonyms
activities
consist them.
Use synonyms
although
there are enormous differences between the Linking Words
activities
between Use synonyms
boys
and Use synonyms
girls
, there is one match in Use synonyms
activities
, music consists Use synonyms
10
% of boy's and girl's Change preposition
of 10
activities
, it's the only match between the Use synonyms
activities
.Use synonyms
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