You have a large extended family, and every year you all get together to go on a big family trip for a week. Your brother is in charge of the plans this year, and you would like to suggest a place you’ve visited before. Write an email to your brother in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: • Name the destination you have in mind. • Briefly describe your previous experience in this place. • Talk about some of this place’s features.

Hi Jack, As you have a big responsibility
this
year to arrange a family trip, I would like to recommend to you my friend’s farmhouse near the Niagra Fall.
This
place is situated between the woods and has a beautiful view of Niagara Lake. Once I got the opportunity to visit that place when my friend celebrated his parent's 50th marriage anniversary in their old family home. We had a wonderful time there, we had so many activities to do like kayaking, tracking and many more, in the lap of nature. As
this
big residence is situated between the forest and has lake flowing by its side, we can enjoy all the experiences,
Moreover
,
this
mansion has 10 big luxury rooms with attached bathrooms, a big dining and lobby area
this
would be enough for our family as we just need 8 rooms. Most importantly, my friend permitted to use it for our family holiday he was more than happy to offer us that place. If you need any help, please feel free to contact me at any time. With Regards, Sam
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