The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The graphs represent how much money the British people spent on fast food weekly and
the
uses of them over a period of 20 years.
Change the word
their
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the high and Linking Words
average earnings
groups Add a hyphen
average-earnings
purchasing
hamburgers Wrong verb form
purchased
most
, Correct article usage
the most
while
the Linking Words
low salary
people spent more on Add a hyphen
low-salary
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
. Use synonyms
However
, burgers and Linking Words
pizza
have Use synonyms
been
significantly increased over that time.
Unnecessary verb
apply
According to
the bar graph, high and middle-livelihood classes spend on hamburgers around 42, and 34 Linking Words
pence
/person, respectively, Use synonyms
whereas
the low economic level Linking Words
spend
less Change the verb form
spends
than15
Correct your spelling
than 15
pence
on the same type of junk food. For Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
, the mid-class of profit expends more than other groups (25 Use synonyms
pence
per person), Use synonyms
in contrast
, the rich and poor people Linking Words
spending
almost the same about 19 Wrong verb form
spend
pence
. As for the Use synonyms
last
type of fast food (Linking Words
pizza
), those who Use synonyms
earning
Change the form of the verb
earn
high
income tend to spend the highest almost 20 Correct article usage
a high
pence
. Comparing to the middle and low Use synonyms
wage
they spent nearby 12 and 8 Fix the agreement mistake
wages
pence
for each person, respectively.
Use synonyms
According to
the line graph, we can see that in 1970 the consumption of hamburgers and Linking Words
pizza
(the average between 30 to 100g) Use synonyms
were
lower than Correct subject-verb agreement
was
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
which was 300 grams. Over Use synonyms
the
time the first Correct article usage
apply
tow
items started to rise until they reach Correct your spelling
two
to
more Change preposition
apply
that
500 grams for burgers and about 290g for Correct your spelling
than
pizza
in 1990. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
Use synonyms
has
been gradually decreased Change the verb form
have
till
200g in 1985, after that slightly recovered to reach more Change preposition
to
that
200 grams in 1990.Correct word choice
than
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips, pizza, pence with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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