The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. » You should write at least 150 words.
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The graphs represent how much money the British people spent on fast food weekly and
the
uses of them over a period of 20 years.
Change the word
their
Overall
, it is clear that
the high and average earnings
groups Add a hyphen
average-earnings
purchasing
hamburgers Wrong verb form
purchased
most
, Correct article usage
the most
while
the low salary
people spent more on Add a hyphen
low-salary
fish
and chips
. However
, burgers and pizza
have been
significantly increased over that time.
Unnecessary verb
apply
According to
the bar graph, high and middle-livelihood classes spend on hamburgers around 42, and 34 pence
/person
, respectively, Change preposition
per person
whereas
the low economic spend less than15
Correct your spelling
than 15
pence
on the same type of junk food. For fish
and chips
, the mid-class of profit expends more than other groups (25 pence
per person), in contrast
, the rich and poor people spending
almost the same about 19 Wrong verb form
spend
pence
. As for the last
type of fast food (pizza
), those who earning
Change the form of the verb
earn
high
income tend to spend the highest almost 20 Correct article usage
a high
pence
. Comparing to the middle and low wage
they spent nearby 12 and 8 Fix the agreement mistake
wages
pence
for each person, respectively.
According to
the line graph, we can see that in 1970 the consumption of hamburgers and pizza
(the average between 30 to 100g) were
lower than Correct subject-verb agreement
was
fish
and chips
which was 300 grams. Over the
time the first Correct article usage
apply
tow
items started to rise until they reach Correct your spelling
two
to
more Change preposition
apply
that
500 grams for burgers and about 290g for Correct your spelling
than
pizza
in 1990. However
, fish
and chips
has
been gradually decreased Change the verb form
have
till
200g in 1985, after that slightly recovered to reach more Change preposition
to
that
200 grams in 1990.Correct word choice
than
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips, pizza, pence with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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