The table illustrates the average monthly sales of ice drinks, tea and coffee, juices, cocktails at small café from January to April.
The table illustrates the average monthly
sales
of ice
Replace the word
iced
drinks
, tea
and coffee
, juices, cocktails
at small café from Correct word choice
and cocktails
January
to April.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of cocktails
sold in January
saw the lowest trend in the period given, while
tea
and coffee
sales
were the highest in January
. Furthermore
, the sales
of ice
drinks
and cocktails
remained unchanged in January
and February.
Out of the four types of drinks
, the number of tea
and coffee
, juices was noticeable
higher over Change the word
noticeably
a
shown period. There was a moderate decrease in the demand Correct article usage
the
of
Change preposition
for
tea
and coffee
, which stood at 250 in January
,
but had fallen Remove the comma
apply
180
by April. Change preposition
to 180
However
, although
there was a small growth, sales
of juices were the same in
the end of the given period at 200.
In terms of Change the preposition
at
ice
drinks
and cocktails
, they both showed unchanged
trend in the first two months 150 and 90. Add an article
an unchanged
the unchanged
While
the number of ice
drinks
sold underwent a significant increase to 190 and 230 respectively, cocktail sails decreased slightly from 110 to 100 in the final month.Submitted by nargiza_san on
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