You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear
Mr.
Forbes,
I am writing to thank you for all the great moments which you bring to our company's meeting in your Change the punctuation
Mr
hotel
that night and Use synonyms
also
inform you briefly about some unpleasant Linking Words
feedbacks
from our guests about the meals.
The perfect service from servants and waiters in the ceremony was as perfect as everybody Correct your spelling
feedback
were
excited with, Change the verb form
was
on the other
Linking Words
hand
the lighting system made Add a comma
,hand
a fabulous moments
for all of my colleagues.
Passing through all Correct the article-noun agreement
fabulous moments
a fabulous moment
good
impressions which your Correct article usage
the good
hotel
brought us, some whispers could be heard during the dinner. Some of the guests were displeased about why soups were too saltyUse synonyms
,
or talking about myself, I seriously like spicy foods, I ordered hot chicken but I didn’t taste Remove the comma
apply
of
any pepper inside that.
Despite the fact that the "Rockstar Change preposition
apply
Hotel
" has Use synonyms
great
investment in Add an article
a great
stuff
Correct your spelling
staff
behavior
, the perfect surrounding and excellent customer service, I wonder why the focus on the meal part is a bit weak. I would like to suggest that there should be a quality assurance system to check the taste of the foods before they Change the spelling
behaviour
delivered
out of the kitchen. Add a missing verb
are delivered
Linking Words
Also
it is possible to prepare some feedback participation machine Add a comma
,Also
on
the lobby to briefly ask customers about their view of Change preposition
in
Use synonyms
hotel's
services.
I look forward to Correct article usage
the hotel's
hear
from you and become Change the verb form
hearing
inform
about improvements in the system.
Kind Regards,
Amir AbolfazliChange the form of the verb
informed
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite