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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays one issue is becoming respectively, that
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 being
attentionally
with intention; in an intentional manner
intentionally
to
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into
 the environment, which surrounded us. It is believed by several
group
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groups
 of people the share of
progressed
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progress
progressing
 countries about being more culpability in the fighting against climate conundrums
such
 as global thaw is superior than the republics which in the period of
developing
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development
. Another group of people perceive that they should not have any differences in
this
 schedule. In
this
 essay I shall discuss both
viewes
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
views
viewers
viewed
 and present some conclusion. In
this
 day in the global world the collectively protect of our environment -is
right way
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the right way
a right way
 of
save
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saving
 our life which can be perfect within normally climate.
Moreover
 the planting of trees in the all countries without
segregate
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segregates
them
people in general
they
 can be
effectively method
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an effective method
effective method
 of protecting precisely world. Though, all
convenients
one of the large landmasses of the earth
continents
 can not be
samely
with safety; in a safe manner
safely
seemly
smelly
 in all countries because of being differently rates in the resources as well as and in that case
th
definite article
the
 chance of
developed
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developing
 countries
outweigh
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outweighs
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secondly tipe
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the secondly type
secondly type
secondly types
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 of republics. In conclusion, the responsibilities should be
samely
offensively malodorous
smelly
 for every
country but
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country, but
 the government must be more accountability to the climate and environmental issues that are having now.

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