Some people think that it is an individual responsibility to take care of an environment but others think it is government's job to do so. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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The safety of
environment
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the environment
is an alarming issue these days. Every nation has become aware of issues related to its protection. Unfortunately, there are several factors like pollution,
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
effect, global warming etc., that have represented as a highly contentious
hazards
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hazard
to the society.
Although
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, some people believe that it is the job of government to
gaurd
direct the course; determine the direction of travelling
guide
the mother nature and others argue that every individual should take care of the surrounding. In my point of view, it needs everyone to combat
this
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issue whether it is a particular person or a government. I will support light to the reasons supporting them.
First
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of all, every human has to be responsible in the way that they dispose of waste. There has to be
reduction
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a reduction
of non-decomposable trash like plastic, rubber and all
sort
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sorts
of industrial left outs, contaminating the
water
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resources. Apart from
this
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, everyone has to be accountable in the way that they use
water
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.
For example
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, in the countries like Australia,
water
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gets enormously wasted for household chores, swimming, ashing vehicles and so on and due to which countries like Africa are running out of
water
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supply. Undoubtedly,
this
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is causing a great imbalance in the nature, which can only be halted by individuals.
On the other hand
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, it has
to be admit
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admitted
that governments of different nations, have been taking a lot of
actions
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action
against the habitat offenders by passing a number of law policies against them.
However
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, authorities can set an example by getting rid of needless modes of private transportation and making use of public transit to avoid
mou
of me or myself
my
no
mould
cars on
road
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the road
.
Also
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, politicians can donate or spend a huge amount of money in planting more trees and creating more greenery resources for
public
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the public
.
This
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makes them play an extremely important role in conquering the environment problem. In a nutshell, as the left hand is to the right, it takes all the masses and ministries of every premises together to fight with
this
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situation. Individuals can let their rulers know that they want something done about it and clearly, governments must take responsibility for that,
otherwise
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it will soon be too late, and
we
reflexive form of "us"
ourselves
and the
next
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generation will suffer serious consequences.
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