Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young university students, others think sending young people to universities only lead to graduate unemployment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

With the advanced education, the

number

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of

undergraduate

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undergraduates

have been increasing

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has been increasing

has increased

. Some insist that a

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of

university

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students only lead the unemployment rate of

high

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highly

educated people to rise and it is not beneficial for

society

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.

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I understand

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opinion, I would argue that the large proportion of undergraduates

have

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has

positive effects on

society

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. Admittedly, there are some

disavantages

the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

disadvantages

to the increasing

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of

university

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students.

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with, many young people may put pressure on having a bachelor's degree by themselves, even though they are not

intrested

having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern

interested

in

university

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.

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, in Korea, almost people in modern

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tend to go to

unversity

the body of faculty and students at a university

university

after

graduated

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graduating

from high school. Some

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

might not try to have enough time to think what they want to be.

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, some

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

could end up

droping

coming down freely under the influence of gravity

dropping

dripping

out of their schools.

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, they might lose tuition fees and their time to search for their goals.

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, I still believe that well-educated people influence

society

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positively. Programmes aimed at preparing global competition for employment help

university

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students to find high quality job.

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, these well-educated people can improve their ability, competing with people who are from everywhere in

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university

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the university

. It

is proved

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is proven

fact that intelligent people can bring about more benefit for economic growth than physical workers.

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, developing the level of education can lead to a national growth in many ways. In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, the increasing

number

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of undergraduates might have a negative effect on individuals, but I believe that

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should be seen as a positive development in many ways.