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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.

#organisations #employees #dress #value #quality #work #appearance
The idea of employees should
dress
 professionally is highly debated, with many people claiming that it
put
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puts
 negative effects on employees mental as well as financial condition.
However
, I do not entirely accept
this
 and I will explain why in
this
 essay. The most conspicuous argument in favour of wearing smart
dress
 is that it will add more
attractviness
the quality of arousing interest; being attractive or something that attracts
attractiveness
 in employees
personel
concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality
personal
personnel
 attire, which help them aggrandise. Not only does it help employee to attract customers and convince them easily, but it
also provide
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also provides
 workers an opportunity to leave
good impression
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a good impression
 on clients and boost their own confidence during
work
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the work
.
Neeedless
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Needless
Needles
 to say, all these benefits stand one in good stead when it comes boosting employees positive attitude while
work
. There are,
however
, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of dressing smartly.
primarily
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Primarily
, the more employee's worried about their
dress
-up, the more they will start elude the quality of
work
.
Besides
, organisations must prefer good quality of
work
instead
 of smart
dress
 up.
unlike
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Unlike
, companies
such
 as Qantas and Zara who gave more importance to
dress
 code of their employees
can not
can not
cannot
 attain
effeciency
the ratio of the output to the input of any system
efficiency
efficiencies
inefficiency
 from their employees, and so as companies
such
 as google, tesla
prefer
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prefers
efficient
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an efficient work
work
 over smart
dress
 code attain more success.
Hence
, it is apparent why many are in favour of getting
dress
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dressed
 up smartly for
work
. In view of the arguments above, one can conclude that the benefits of getting
dress
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dressed
 up smartly are indeed too great to ignore.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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