Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young university students, others think sending young people to universities only lead to graduate unemployment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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of undergraduates has been increasing. Some insist that a

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of

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students only lead the unemployment rate of high-educated people to rise and it is not beneficial for

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.

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. Admittedly, there are some disadvantages to the increasing

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of

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students.

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with, many young people may put pressure on having a bachelor's degree by themselves even though it is not necessary.

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, in Korea, almost people in modern

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tend to go to the

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after being graduated from high school. Because of

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tendency, some people could apply for admission to

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without enough thinking what they want to be.

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if those could graduate from

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, they are likely to be unsatisfied with their major. In

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sense, a lack of confidence with their major could lead to frequent failures in finding decent jobs.

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tendency to demand higher education could not only increase graduate unemployment rate, but

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also cause

individuals to lose time and money.

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, I still believe that well-educated people influence

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positively. Programmes aimed at preparing global competition for employment help

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students to find high quality jobs.

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is because

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students can improve their ability through these programmes, competing with their peers and obtaining expertise in their field. It is a proved fact that intelligent people can bring about more benefits for economic growth than physical workers.

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, strengthening individuals' ability in terms of their major can successfully contribute to social outcomes

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as health care or technology industries.

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, developing the level of education will lead to a national growth more and more in many ways. In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, the increasing

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of graduates might have a negative effect on both individuals and

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, but I believe that

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should be seen as a positive development in many ways.