The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year of 2009
The bar chart compares the consumption
on
five primary categories, including food, housing, transportation, health care and clothing in four different countries in 2009.
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of
It is clear that
consumers spent money on housing much more than that of
the other four categories shown. Change preposition
apply
By contrast
, the percentage of citizens in these nations spending on health care was the lowest.
It can be seen from the chart, the percentage of Americans allocating money to ‘housing’
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the ‘housing’
around
26%, which was 12% and 9% higher than that for food and transportation respectively. Simultaneously, Japan invested Add a missing verb
is around
most
money Correct article usage
the most
on
food, at just 23%, followed by 14% of Americans, 15% of Canadians and just 20% of British. The proportions of the US and Change preposition
in
Canada
purchasers expending on transportation were higher than the figures for the others, with around 17 % and 20% respectively.
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Canadian
On the other hand
, healthcare and clothing were the least two expensive sectors. There were no significant differences in the proportions of the citizens in these nations spending on clothing, around 4 % to 6%. However
, the rate of expenditure for health care in the United States was 7%, the
figures for Correct word choice
and the
Canada
and Replace the word
Canadian
Japan
citizens were the same, Replace the word
Japanese
with
4%.Change preposition
at
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