The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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production
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of concrete for construction.
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mixing four ingredients in a concrete mixer.
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the concrete
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