You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants athe meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in order to give feedback after my company's meeting, which was happening in your hotel
last
week.
All my colleagues were appreciated by your hotel, particularly in Linking Words
kind
atmosphere which was done by your staff, modern architecture and design of the hall, rooms, the Add an article
the kind
a kind
dinning
room, the meeting room. Everything there is done in modern style what is important nowadays.
But Correct your spelling
dining
also
I would like to tell you about the problems with which my team had met during the lunch. Linking Words
First
of all, if it is possible, add different juices, because you said you have European cuisine, but we couldn't find any juices. Linking Words
Linking Words
Also
most of the part of our team were vegans and when I arranged our meeting with your manager I told her about Add a comma
,Also
this
. Unfortunately, Linking Words
this
part of the people Linking Words
were
unhappy about Change the verb form
was
such
fact.
I am kindly asking you to struggle with these problems Linking Words
such
as juices, what is important Linking Words
on
meetings and at launches. What is more to the effort on Change preposition
at
vegan
menu what is really important nowadays too, because there are Add an article
the vegan
lot's
of people who have Change the noun form
lots
lot
such
lifestyle for the well-done job of your hotel.
Looking forward to Linking Words
communicate
with you again.
Yours faithfully,
Maria IvanovaChange the verb form
communicating
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite