The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the facilities of a major university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph indicates how many people were part of the academic
staff
in the faculties of a major Use synonyms
university
in 2012, with a Use synonyms
further
classification by gender. As illustrated by the graph, the Linking Words
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percentage
of female colleagues.
The analysis of data shows that the number of women working in Use synonyms
education
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the education
faculty
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university
was considerably higher than that of Use synonyms
men
in the same field, (reaching around 75% and about 25% respectively). Use synonyms
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, the Linking Words
percentage
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men
as engineer tutors was five times as much of female engineer tutors in the Use synonyms
university
in 2012 (Use synonyms
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whereas
women were just under 20%). Linking Words
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, the proportion of male academic Linking Words
staff
members was nearly as much as the female colleagues in the medical Use synonyms
faculty
(with the former peaked at around 45% and the latter at about 50%). In the business Use synonyms
faculty
though, the Use synonyms
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staff
was twice as much as female Use synonyms
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on
the corresponding field. Specifically, around 60% of Change preposition
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men
and about 35% of women worked in the business Use synonyms
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university
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