The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the facilities of a major university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph indicates how many people were part of the academic
staff
in the faculties of a major university
in 2012, with a further
classification by gender. As illustrated by the graph, the percentage
of male academic staff
members was significantly higher in faculties that deal with science and engineering compared with the percentage
of female colleagues.
The analysis of data shows that the number of women working in education
Correct article usage
the education
faculty
of the university
was considerably higher than that of men
in the same field, (reaching around 75% and about 25% respectively). On the other hand
, the percentage
of men
as engineer tutors was five times as much of female engineer tutors in the university
in 2012 (men
were approximately 85% whereas
women were just under 20%). However
, the proportion of male academic staff
members was nearly as much as the female colleagues in the medical faculty
(with the former peaked at around 45% and the latter at about 50%). In the business faculty
though, the percentage
of male staff
was twice as much as female staff
on
the corresponding field. Specifically, around 60% of Change preposition
in
men
and about 35% of women worked in the business faculty
of the
major Correct article usage
a
university
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