After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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with enthusiasm; in an enthusiastic manner

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having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern

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advanced in complexity or elaboration

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. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that never be interested in money

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After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

Some say that sprots play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both view, and give your opinion.

Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is worsening. What possibly can cause this problem? What measures can be taken to resolve it?

Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person’s decision-making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.