The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides information about
life
cycle of salmon which is large species Add an article
the life
fish
. Change preposition
of fish
Overall
, the salmon goes through four stages in life. The whole process continues Linking Words
about
10 years.
First of all, adult Change preposition
for about
salmons
lay eggs on small stones and reeds in Use synonyms
upper
river where Add an article
the upper
an upper
water
is slow moving. After that small Correct article usage
the water
salmons
that are named Use synonyms
fries
hatch out from eggs. In Use synonyms
this
stage, Linking Words
fries
are 3-8 centimetres. In the following stage, Use synonyms
fries
go to the lower river. Use synonyms
In here
, water is fast flowing. They live here Change preposition
Here
approximately
4 years.
Afterwards, Change preposition
for approximately
fries
become smolts with a length of 12-15 centimetres. Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
, smolts move to the open sea and Linking Words
then
they live here Linking Words
approximately
5 years. Ultimately, they turn to adult Change preposition
for approximately
salmons
with a length of 70-76 centimetres. Use synonyms
Then
they go to the upper river again and lay eggs. Adult Linking Words
salmons
do Use synonyms
this
process againLinking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmons, fries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 3 times.
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