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According to the bar chart illustrated, it shows the
percentage
 of teachers by gender male and female in some different types of educational settings in
UK
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the UK
 in 2010. There are six types of educational
settings including
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settings, including
nursery
/
pre-
school
, primary
school
, secondary
school
, college,
private training institute
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a private training institute
 and
university
. As it is obvious from the bar chart, the
percentage
 of women is decreasing while the education levels are going higher from pre-
school
 to the
university
.
However
, the
percentage
for
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of
 male teachers are completely vise-versa where the
percentage
 of pre-
school
are
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is
 in the lowest and it is the highest for
university
level
. For three educational settings the
percentage
 of female teachers are more than 50
percent which
Accept comma addition
percent, which
 includes
nursery
/
pre-
school
, primary
school
 and secondary
school
 and the
percentage
for
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of
in
 college is equal to male teachers around 50
percent
.
Additionally
, the private training
institute
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institution
 and
university
 educational settings are having fewer female teacher less than 50
percent
.
In
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On
 the other hand, a few male teachers are playing a role in the
nursery
/
pre-
school
level
compare
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compared
 to female ones which is around 5
percent
. The primary
school
also
 is showing that the
percentage
 of male teachers are lower than 10
percent
.
Moreover
, for the secondary
school
, college and private training institute the
percentage
 of male teachers are around 45, 50 and 55
percent
 respectively.
Additionally
, the
percentage
 of male teachers for
university
level
 is the highest around 70
percent
. Overall, the chart shows that higher educational settings are more male-dominated.
However
, women have a significant presence in the
nursery
/
pre-
school
level
.

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