Bar chart of Percentage of male and female teachers in different educational setting in uk in 2010

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According to the bar chart illustrated, it shows the
percentage
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of teachers by gender male and female in some different types of educational settings in
UK
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the UK
in 2010. There are six types of educational
settings including
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settings, including
nursery
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pre-
school
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, primary
school
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, secondary
school
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, college,
private training institute
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a private training institute
and
university
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. As it is obvious from the bar chart, the
percentage
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of women is decreasing while the education levels are going higher from pre-
school
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to the
university
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.
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, the
percentage
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for
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of
male teachers are completely vise-versa where the
percentage
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of pre-
school
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are
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is
in the lowest and it is the highest for
university
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level
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. For three educational settings the
percentage
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of female teachers are more than 50
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percent which
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percent, which
includes
nursery
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pre-
school
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, primary
school
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and secondary
school
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and the
percentage
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for
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of
in
college is equal to male teachers around 50
percent
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.
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, the private training
institute
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institution
and
university
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educational settings are having fewer female teacher less than 50
percent
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.
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On
the other hand, a few male teachers are playing a role in the
nursery
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pre-
school
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level
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compare
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compared
to female ones which is around 5
percent
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. The primary
school
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also
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is showing that the
percentage
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of male teachers are lower than 10
percent
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.
Moreover
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, for the secondary
school
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, college and private training institute the
percentage
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of male teachers are around 45, 50 and 55
percent
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respectively.
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, the
percentage
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of male teachers for
university
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level
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is the highest around 70
percent
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. Overall, the chart shows that higher educational settings are more male-dominated.
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, women have a significant presence in the
nursery
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pre-
school
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level
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.

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