The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph and table illustrate the fluctuation in export earnings in a country through several product
catergories
from 2015 to 2016. Correct your spelling
categories
Overall
, the majority of earnings came from petroleum and engineered goods
, while
textiles and engineered goods
made the largest percentile jumps.
The Petroleum products remained its leading position in exporting earnings with a 3% rise, which moderate
climbed from just over $61 Change the word
moderately
billion
in 2015 to around $63 billion
by 2016. While
its follower, engineered goods
, experienced an improvement by
8.5% equivalent to 4 Change preposition
of
billions
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billion
of
dollars
Compared to these two exports, the other products were much lower. Gems and jewellery, the only export to decrease, went down 5.18% from $43 Change preposition
apply
billion
to $41 billion
. With respect to the former, agricultural goods
were virtually equal at approximately $31 billion
throughout the period. This
number is higher than the data of
Textiles about $5 Change preposition
for
billion
in 2015. However
, Textiles had pulled approximately
Change preposition
to approximately
level
with agriculture by 2016.
Specially, The profit Correct article usage
the level
in
exporting experienced growth except for gems and jewellery, which Change preposition
from
is
experienced a moderate dropUnnecessary verb
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