The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
“The bar graph shows the combined time spent in billions of
minutes
, on three different kinds of phone
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a phone
the phone
call
in the United Kingdom, from 1995-2002.
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calls
Overall
, local calls were the most popular over the whole period, with national and international calls and calls on mobiles second
and third
respectively. However
, the number of minutes
spent on international and national calls and mobiles both increased over the period; with mobile minutes
increasing dramatically, thus
narrowing the gap between the three categories by 2002.
Minutes
spent on local calls fluctuated over the time period, with just over 70 billion
minutes
in 1995, peaking at approximately 90 billion
in 1999 and then
steadily decreasing to just over 70 billion
minutes
in 2002.
National and international calls increased steadily year on year, from just under 40 billion
minutes
in 1995 to a peak of just over 60 billion
in 2002. Mobile minutes
increased at a very rapid pace from approximately 3 billion
in 1995 to around 45 billion
in 2002. Mobile phone usage nearly doubled from approximately 22 billion
minutes
in 2000 to 40 billion
in 2001.”Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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