You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to the advertisement published in Perth Today magazine
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week seeking to recruit a caretaker for their child. The foremost reason for expressing my interest
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job is the opportunity to save
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on house rent. Actually, I am a student of Melbourne University and after few days my summer vacation will start so I would like to utilize that time in earning income. On top of it, I am a certified babysitting trainer. In my
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I had completed
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grade and I used to do babysitting a lot for my brother kids when I was in my country. I have a vast knowledge of handling kids with their different needs when their parents are out for work. Only on weekends, I would like to spend some time with my college friends who stay in
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hostel. We usually meet to discuss
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study projects and sometimes we go out together to celebrate our birthdays. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Manisha Tanwar

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advertisement
  • live with
  • look after
  • six-year-old child
  • suitable
  • employ
  • free time
  • Australia
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