Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with police or the military. Others think women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that police and military are required to maintain the safety of the society. Some people might say that many females must be hired as regular while others think that it is not appropriate to recruit women for the hazardous jobs. I assume that women should be treated as equal.

This

essay will address the both ideas about the women’s jobs.

First

of all, everyone must be handled equally in the modern society.

In other words

, all people should remove the stereotype. Women

also

can be a police or

military because

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military, because

there are no gender criteria to protect citizens.

For example

, females can train same as what males do and

also

they must be educated to sue the guns as part of their

jobs

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job

. In spite of the fact that using guns

are difficult they

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are difficult, they

should do that for people’s safety because if they are not intending to their duties, the security of society would be deteriorated.

Furthermore

, they have eyes to aim targets and hands to shoot guns which means there is no way to discriminate them.

On the other hand

, it is too much dangerous when it comes to becoming

women’s job

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a women’s job

. Despite the fact that the removal of gender discrimination the majority of criminals are

men which

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men, which

means they are stronger than women.

For example

, even though females are

trained they

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trained, they

cannot dominate men properly due to the difference of physical strength.

Therefore

, some occupations are not proper for women definitely. In conclusion, it is sometimes claimed that some jobs are hard to hire for

women but

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women, but

we have to encourage them to be equal. Once that gender stereotype is

disappeared

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disappearing

, our community will be better to

live

go away from a place

leave

.