IELTS Writing Model - Cambridge 8 Test 4 Goods transported in UK (1974 – 2002) (my friends version)

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The given line graph compares the amount of good transported

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road

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water

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, rail and pipeline in the

Suggestion

during 1974 to 2002. Overall

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the highest quantities of

good

any substance that can be metabolized by an animal to give energy and build tissue

food

was shipped

Suggestion

were shipped

via

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road whereas

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road, whereas

pipeline remained the least commonly used mode of

transportation

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As can be seen from the line the graph

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milion

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

million

millions

tonnes of commodities were transported by

road

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in 1974 and

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this

plural of "this"

these

quantities increased to about 97

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milion

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

million

tonnes at the end of

period

Suggestion

the period

(2002)

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while pipeline started with 1

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milion

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

million

tonnes of goods in 1974.

This

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figure rose 20

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milion

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

million

millions

tonnes of

good

any substance that can be metabolized by an animal to give energy and build tissue

food

were delivered in the year 2002. According to the given line graph

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Rail and

water

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transported 40

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milion

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

million

tonnes of

commodies

articles of commerce

commodities

comedies

committees

in 1974 and

this

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quantity had some changes

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In details

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the amount of goods

were shipped

Suggestion

was shipped

via

water

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went up about 62

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milion

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

million

tonnes in 2002 while rail still

mantained

kept in good condition

maintained

maintains

the same figure of the year 1974 (40

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milion

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

million

tonnes) before had the decrease from 1986 to 1994 (35

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milion

(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units

million

tonnes of goods) In conclusion

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road

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transportation

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and

water

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transportation

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carried more quantities than 2

transportation

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left.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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179 words

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IELTS Writing Model - Cambridge 8 Test 4 Goods transported in UK (1974 – 2002) (my friends version)

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