Food travels thousands of miles from producers to customers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people only ate the local food produced by farmers. Advantages and disadvantages.

The table shows
percentages
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the percentages
of people who were attending either Speciaist Schools or Grammar Schools or Voluntary-controlled Schools or Community Schools in the
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pardon
from 2000 to 2009. According to the data,
Community Schools
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Community, Schools
illustrates the increase of students from 2000 to 2009. Whereas,
number
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a number
the number
of pupils from others three types of schools demonstrate gradually decline. But
decrease
Suggestion
the decrease
of pupils from Specialist Schools is not as rapidly as recession of students from Voluntary-controlled Schools, where was average 15% drop. Secondary, sum of pupils from Grammar Schools from 2000 to 2009, decreased by 50 percent or by half. To compare, amount of students from Community Schools
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rises
to around 46%, almost 50%.
Also
between 2000 and 2009
this
total has never reduced. Both downwards of the
number
of students of
Specialist Schools
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the Specialist Schools
and Grammer Schools was not as huge and significant as decline of Voluntary-controlled  Schools. Overall, while
number
of pupils from Specialist Schools, Grammar Schools and Voluntary-controlled Schools was diminishing,
number
of pupils from Community Schools showed upward rise.

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