many employers are employing people with good skills as well as good qualifications. do you agree or disagree that good skills are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job?

Myriad of articles is written every year, regarding the qualifications of the best employee for each field. A lot of hiring managers are seeking the perfect skills
in addition
to the best competencies. Business
magaziens
a periodic publication containing pictures and stories and articles of interest to those who purchase it or subscribe to it
magazines
magazine's
magazine
recommends to look for mature practices side by side with the best competencies, and I agree with them.
First
and foremost, job market
always look
Suggestion
always looks
for the rare skills and give them the highest dollar, while without
efficient practical
Accept comma addition
efficient, practical
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
,
candidate
Suggestion
the candidate
a candidate
candidates
will not
last
for
long time
Suggestion
a long time
in the job. Which affects the learning curve of the company at all, and result in high
turn over
the ratio of the number of workers that had to be replaced in a given time period to the average number of workers
turnover
of employees,
in addition
to the bad relations between
colleauges
an associate that one works with
colleagues
colleges
collages
that may negatively
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the whole business.
On the other hand
, effective social
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, will
stablize
make stable and keep from fluctuating or put into an equilibrium
stabilize
the
work
environment, which will lead to creation of mature
work
groups and encourage creativity between the members of the workforce.
Although
this
team may lack the rare experience at
first
, but with a motivational
leaders
Suggestion
leader
, they will generate their own by the time.
As a result
, the company will generate his own culture which will absorb the characters that are suitable to
work
with them and refuse who are looking for benefits as a priority. In a nutshell, No one can deny the need of technical experience, to get the workload done in a perfect way, but
human resource manager
Suggestion
a human resource manager
should select candidates who
has
Suggestion
have
the minimum requirements of the good
manars
social deportment
manners
that will maintain the
work
culture as well as the technicalities required.
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