The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
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the chart illustrates the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories in eight timeline first, let us talk about
local
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the local
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- fixed
line
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. the highest is 1999 (more than ninety billion) and the lowest is 2002 and 1995 with more than 70 billion.
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we
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apply
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let
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talk about the national and international-fixed
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. the top is 2002 and the lower rank is 1995. in
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the mobiles the topmost is 2002 and the bottom in the leaderboard is 1995.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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