The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
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the chart illustrates the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories in eight timeline
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. the highest is 1999 (more than ninety billion) and the lowest is 2002 and 1995 with more than 70 billion. Fix the agreement mistake
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. the top is 2002 and the lower rank is 1995. in Fix the agreement mistake
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the mobiles the topmost is 2002 and the bottom in the leaderboard is 1995.Change the wording
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