The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
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The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities
. The first graph
shows the cultural and leisure activities
that boys participate in, whereas
the second
graph
shows the activities
in which the
girls participate.
The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's Correct article usage
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activities
. The first graph
shows the cultural and leisure activities
that boys participate in, whereas
the second
graph
shows the activities
in which the
girls participate.Correct article usage
apply
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