The pia charts bellow show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The two pie charts reveal the comparison of five types of stamina production in France in 1995 and in 2005. Overall, it is clearly seen that both of two years, the most important production of intensity resources were coal and gas, and they were approximate half of the whole toughness resources, while nuclear and other type of toughness resources produced the least proportions of vitality in France. If we look at the details, toughness was produced by coal in 29, 80% in the
first
year and that was a very slight increase of about only 1% to 30.9% in 2005 in France. And that event was the same in 1995 gas produced 29,63%, that was 30,1% after ten years.
Nevertheless
, another two types of stamina resources which is nuclear and other spiritual resources increased about to 5% and their proportions of power suitably nuclear 10,10%, while other resources 9,10%. But petrol was one of the sources of strength which decreased in production from 28,27% to 19, 55%, perspective in 1995 and in 2005.
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