The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

It is believed that the role of women in the family and in the community has changed significantly in the past two decades.

Although

some people have called it a positive development, others think that it has caused some serious problems for children, since they have less attention from their mothers who are mostly working. To a certain extent, I would agree with the statement, but I think it will depend on the individuals themselves on how they manage their

time

. On the one hand, it is true that as a career woman, women have less

time

for their children. They have to leave home early in the morning, while their children are still sleeping in their bed and arrive back at night when the children will have been asleep.

As a result

, they have little

time

for their family and children are left at home alone. They become

depress

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depressed

or stress due to the lack of

attentions

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attention

from their mothers and lead them in doing some negative things to attract their mother's attention,

such

as using drugs or involve in

crime

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criminal

activities.

On the other hand

, some working women have successfully balanced between their professional and personal

time

. They have learned to work in the most efficient and effective ways and managed their priority well.

Therefore they

Accept comma addition

Therefore, they

would not have to spend

such

a long hours at work and could give more

time

for their children.

Consequently

, the children would not be feeling abandoned or neglected, while the mothers could continue with their work. In conclusion, it is a fact that many women have become working women these days, and some people think that the trend

has cause

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has caused

some problems for the children. To a certain level, I would agree that the rising number of working women could cause some problems for the family, as I think it depends on the person themselves. If they could manage their schedule and priority well, I think they could be successful working women and housewives as well.