You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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We have provided
with
a table, revealing Change preposition
apply
proportion
of four Add an article
the proportion
kind
of fuel utilization for electricity purposes in five Asian countries in 2005.
Change to a plural noun
kinds
Overall
, it is clear that
in all countries the way they get electric
differs from each other.
Replace the word
electricity
To begin
with, nuclear is widely used by nearly half (49%) of Japanese
Correct article usage
the Japanese
while
it was never utilized in Thailand. Furthermore
, coal and ignite was
mainly used in Malaysia and Singapore that accounted for sixty-one and forty-two respectively.
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
However
, the main source of electricity has become petroleum in Thailand (36%) while
it is much lower in other countries around 2-3%.
Moreover
, 48% of Koreans utilized water and wind for electric
Replace the word
electricity
while
nuclear is regarded latter endemic means of fuel in practice (33%).
Apart from the aforementioned types of fuels, there was also
another way to be provided with electricity that 42% of Thai use followed by 39% of Singaporeans and Japenese
.Correct your spelling
Japanese
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