The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts demonstrate how
the
household Correct article usage
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energy
usage contributed to the number of emitted greenhouse gases in Australia.
Overview, the use of gas in heating is obvious that a majority proportion of how the power had been used in housework. Moreover
, it
heating follows Correct pronoun usage
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the
similar trend in Correct article usage
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the
Australian household polluted gas emissions.
For the power consumption within households, heating purposes stand ahead of the rest with up to 72% of all uses which is shown in Correct article usage
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graph
as 42% and 30% for normal heating and water heating, respectively. Comparatively, the uses of Add an article
the graph
energy
in cooling objectives are relatively low. Cooling
process uses only two Add an article
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of all Change the spelling
per cent
energy
consumed, while
refrigeration takes 7%.
Regarding the use of energy
in Australia, Greenhouse gases are emitted. Following the logic, heating processes lead to the largest number of gas emission
at 47% when normal and water heating are all included. Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
However
, the use of energy
in refrigerators causes a larger percentage of emissions than expected. It produces 14 percent
of the gases which lead to greenhouse effectsChange the spelling
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cooling progress remains the same as a small number at 3%.Submitted by nutnon2228 on
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