The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart and table year
illusrate
Correct your spelling
illustrate
illustrates
that
the past, present and future Correct word choice
apply
population
of japan
from 1950 to 2055, ratio
of Correct article usage
the ratio
population
aged 65 years or above in Correct article usage
the population
millions
.
In startingChange the article
the
of
1955, Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
Japan
's population
was only 84.1 Fix the agreement mistake
million
millions
as the years Correct your spelling
million
passing
the Wrong verb form
passed
population
also
increasing
till 2015. Wrong verb form
increased
During
1995 to 2015 Change preposition
From
the
Correct article usage
apply
Japan
's population
increased almost by 41 millions
, Change to singular
million
however
from 1990 to 2015 there is increasing in population
but very
slow rate as Correct article usage
a very
compare
to 1950 to 1995. Change the form of the verb
compared
Therefore
, after the
2015 Correct article usage
apply
Japan
's population
start declaine
till 2055 at Correct your spelling
decline
very
high rate from 124.4 to 89.9Add an article
a very
Change to singular
million
millions
.
On the other hand
, Japan
's population
aged 65 years or higher keep
improving from 1950 to 2055 by 4.1 to 36.5 Correct subject-verb agreement
keeps
millions
, as Change to singular
million
compare
in ratio its almost only 4.1% of Wrong verb form
compared
total
Add an article
the total
a total
population
of japan
in 1955 but in 2055 it is 41 percent
.
In general, Change the spelling
per cent
There
are clearly Fix capitalization
there
observe
in Change the form of the verb
observed
bar
Correct article usage
the bar
chat
that Correct your spelling
chart
Population
of Correct article usage
the Population
japan
is increasing in past , decrease
in future and Wrong verb form
decreasing
almost
constant at present. People whose age is 65 and above Add a missing verb
is almost
are
keep increasing from 1955 to 2055.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, japan, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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