The two graphs below show the percentage of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in litres in selected countries for the period 1960-2000. Write a report for a lecturer describing the information in the graphs.
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The two graphs below show the
percentage
of smokers
and the consumption
of alcohol
in litres in selected countries
, for the period 1960-2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons. The two graphs represent comparisons the
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of the
percentage
of smokers
in the population every day in USA
, Correct article usage
the USA
Japan
, Holland
and Correct word choice
and Holland
alcohol
consumption
in liters
per Change the spelling
litres
person
among
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in
Turkey
, Holland
and USA
from 1960 to 2000.As can be seen from the first graph, 3 Correct article usage
the USA
countries
of the survey indicated a downward trend in percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
smokers
from 1960 to 2000. Holland
revealed the highest level
while
USA
stood the lowest Correct article usage
the USA
percentage
of smokers
. In 1960, Holland
represented 59% of smokers
while
USA
represented 40% and in 2000 Correct article usage
the USA
Holland
showed 32% of smokers
while
USA
indicated 19%. From 1960 to 1970, the Correct article usage
the USA
percentage
of Holland
smokers
remained unchanged at 59% during which Japan
and USA
dropped very slightly from 49% to 48% and from 40% to 39% respectively.Holland
represented a dramatic change during 1970s
when its smoker Change the article
the 1970s
percentage
slumped sharply from 59% to 44% in
between 1970 and 1980. From 1980 to 2000, Change preposition
apply
Holland
and Japan
seemed decline
slowly at the same Fix the infinitive
to decline
level
. The gaps of
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in
percentage
between Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
Japan
and USA
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the USA
seemed
stay unchanged Add the particle
toseemed
about
10-12% from 1960 to 2000. It can be clear from the Change preposition
by about
second
graph that 3 countries
rose up to the peak of alcohol
consumption
in 1980. Holland
represented the highest level
of 11. 3 lirters
/Correct your spelling
litres
litters
person
while
USA
and Turkey
represented the second
and the third
at 10. 1 and 1. 9 lirters
/Correct your spelling
litres
litters
person
respectively in 1980.Holland
revealed a dominant increase of
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in
alcohol
consumption
while
others showed a gradual one from 1960 to 1980. During this
time, Holland
shot up from 3. 9 litres/person
in 1960 to the peak of 11. 3% in 1980. If USA
showed the highest Correct article usage
the USA
level
of alcohol
consumption
in 1960 , Holland
prevailed above 3 countries
from 1980 at
to 2000. Change preposition
apply
Turkey
reveals the lowest alcohol
consumption
when it represented the significant gaps among the others. Especially the graph showed the gaps
of 9. 4 litres/Fix the agreement mistake
gap
person
between Turkey
and Holland
in
the pinnacle of 1980.Change preposition
at
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