The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates information concerning the average number of
hours
that male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
spend per Fix the agreement mistake
females
week
on
doing seven activities at home.
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Overall
, men
spends
most of Change the verb form
spend
the
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their
time
to watch
television, Change the verb form
watching
while
the most
favourite activity of women is cooking. The figure Correct quantifier usage
apply
also
clearly shows that both genders spent the least of their time
on
gardening. There was a significant difference in Change preposition
apply
time
spending
for using Replace the word
spent
internet
between Correct article usage
the internet
two
groups.
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the two
Men
spend most of their time
on
watching Television, which accounted Change preposition
apply
14
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for 14
hours
per weeks
. They Fix the agreement mistake
week
also
spent time
on internet
higher than Add an article
the internet
time
to cook
, which Change the verb form
cooking
were
12 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
hours
per weeks
and 8 Fix the agreement mistake
week
hours
per weeks
respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
week
Men
had an average time
on the remaining activities outlay between 2 to 5 hours
.
On the other hand
, the largest amount of time
was
spent by women was used to preparing Unnecessary verb
apply
foods
(15 Fix the agreement mistake
food
hours
per week
). Likewise
, they also
spend 12 hours
per weeks
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week
to watch
television. Within a Change the verb form
watching
week
, women also
spend time
nearly 5 to 6 hours
on chores, which were washed
up and cleaning Wrong verb form
washing
house
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the house
as well as
other leisure activity
, namely reading Fix the agreement mistake
activities
at
an averageChange preposition
apply
5
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of 5
hours
. In addition
, they spend the lowest amount of their time
at 1 hour per week
on gardening, which nearly
the same amount as that of Add a missing verb
is nearly
men
(2 hours
per week
).Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, men, time, weeks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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