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Considering that adults spend much of their lives at work, having job satisfaction is extremely important. What factors contributes to job satisfaction ? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all employees ?

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People are spending half of their day at workplaces so it must be enjoyable. If people are not enjoying the
work
 they
then
 they don’t have
work
 satisfaction and it’s immensely important to have
work
 satisfaction. Multiples factor
are
Suggestion
is
 part of job
satisfaction including
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satisfaction, including
 your interest, co-workers, amount of
work
. One should be doing the
work
 which ignites spark and happiness in
you
of you or yourself
your
.
Person
Suggestion
A person
The person
should woke
Suggestion
should wake
 up in the morning being excited to get to the
work
. One should be doing what his passion and he loves. Co-workers plays a vital role because those are the people who are around you in your working
hours whereas
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hours, whereas
 it depends how’s your relation with your
collogues
an associate that one works with
colleagues
collages
colleges
. Another part is how much
work
 you are doing? Are you working overtime or you boss doesn’t love you and overloads you with the
work
. Expectations are far way from reality. Most of people do not like or literally hate their jobs, co-workers or environment they working
in
Suggestion
with
.

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