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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects.Other people think that,in today's world,subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Primary education plays a very important role in a
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's
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. A
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 should have basic
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 about each and every area of
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 which help the
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 in
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life
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. Undoubtedly, today's
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 is all about
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 and different inventions of science. Before reaching to a conclusion both opinions will be discussed. Admittedly, today's
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 is all about new inventions and handling
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, due to which parents want their
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 to excel in science field.
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, the children feel boring cramming different names and dates, which
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 kills their creativity. It is believed that according to the increase in
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, soon the
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 will be of robots. Parents see bright future for the students in the science stream. On the flip side, if we take a look on the other phase of society, they say that the
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 should have
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 about our origin, which I think is important. History being a non-practical field teachers use conventional methodology due to which history sounds boring subject. In spite of
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, we should
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 about what we have suffered and sacrificed to reach till
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 position along with how different civilisation, dynasties as well as kingdoms have an impact on us. If not in detail a
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 should have basic
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 ad should know about the religions. To conclude,unquestionably, today's
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 and coming
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 is all baout
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 but knowing about our past together with about our precious culture is
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 equally importont to know
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