Table-The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.

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the workforce in

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production in two nations, England and Wales, over the period of 50 years, starting from 1851.

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a downward trend in the number of

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in

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countries, an upward trend could be seen in the

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for

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manufacturing

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over the period shown. It is

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noticeable that female

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made up higher numbers than male

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chart with more details, in 1851, the

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workforce reached a peak of around 130.750 employees, including 53964 males and 76786 females.

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, the number of

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this

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year was the lowest, at only 272.

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, in the following ten years, the sum of

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factories

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was triple, with the

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reaching 761

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,

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the total

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fell by approximately 20.000

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. From 1881 to 1901, the statistic of total employees went down nearly in half, ranging from 67.904 to 38.942

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of the period. Meanwhile, the

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silk

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factories

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experienced a small drop, the

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being 702 and ending at 623, a decrease of around 70

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