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You are staying in an alien country. You have recently received a letter from your wife in which she has complained of your son's activities. Write a letter to your son to counsel him. In your letter, write: what you came to know about his behaviour why you are upset about such activities what kind of behaviour you are expecting from him

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Dear John, I hope you are doing great my dear son. I am writing
this
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 letter to inform you that,
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 came to know about your behaviour in
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last
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 few days. I am very
dissappointed
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disappointed
hear
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to hear
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 from
yopur
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your
 mother, but
you
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apply
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dont
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don't
 worry about it we can change
everthing
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everything
. You should obey MOm and Dad words. You give respect to everyone like, Elders, Grandparents, and youngsters
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. What
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 actually came to know about you,
that is
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inrespectful
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respectful
in respectful
 talks,
time
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mangaments
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management
,spending lots of
time
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 with you are friends and playing, irresponsible in your study and you became very lazy person too. these activities make me so upset on
last
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 days so
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 would like to recommend you to avoid
unneccessary
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unnecessary
 friendship,you should aware of what you think and what you speak to everyone. You should
maitain
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maintain
 your physical and mental health
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 eat proper food and stay healthy. That will think positively. at the
time
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, you should spend
time
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for
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studying and playing. Better
yoou
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you
 have
create
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time
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a time
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 table for your daily activities so let's plan
accrodingly
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accordingly
. My dear son,
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 am expecting
from
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you
become
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to become
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 a very nice person and have
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good behaviour. You should speak very
politly
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politely
polite
 and give respect to them always. Keep your mind always
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positively
 and energetic. To give more importance to your study as well as your free
time
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. I look forward to your mom
next
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 letter , regarding your good qualities. With Love Dad.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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