Topic 1: In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays soft skills
such
as
team work
cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)
teamwork
, Problem-solving, and stress management developed during the youth age are replacing the acquisition of
an
Suggestion
a
university diploma from a prestigious university for
been
the state or fact of existing
being
successful in the job world. Even though
the trendy
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the trend
the trends
for the
next
years will be that headhunters will prioritize practical qualification among candidates from the hard skills, I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that formal instruction is as important as informal qualification. Formal teaching helps students to improve their discipline and habits. Responsibility, punctuality, and self
order are
Accept comma addition
order, are
some of the
skils
an ability that has been acquired by training
skills
schools
that school reinforce and are
indispensable part
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an indispensable part
of every single employee. During the school years,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
during university instruction, young people not only acquire
theorical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
theatrical
knolege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
, but
also
they create a social interconnection between friends and
collegues
an associate that one works with
colleagues
colleges
that increase the possibility to reach a better position in the “Real world”. For some sociologist, these social networks are an excellent background to face the world market with an extra help. In my opinion formal education is not antiquated at all because,
instead
of
represent
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representing
an
obstacule
something immaterial that stands in the way and must be circumvented or surmounted
obstacle
for increasing informal qualifications,
its
the thing named or in question
it
complements them through the social social
interaccion
a mutual or reciprocal action; interacting
interaction
integration
and habits
buiding
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
from an early age.
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