the chart below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following pie chart
illustrate
the proportion of Change the verb form
illustrates
water
used for different needs namely : industry
, agriculture
, and domestic use
in six regions
of the world. Water
usage varies a lot across regions
. For instance
, in North America
and Europe
, zater
is mainly used for Correct your spelling
water
later
industry
while
in Africa
, South East Asia
, Central Asia
and South America
water
is mainly used for agriculture
.
In Europe
53% of Add a comma
,Europe
water
is used for industry
. In contrast
, North America
uses 5% less water
compared for
their Change preposition
to
industry
. But North America
uses more water
than europe
for Change the capitalization
Europe
agriculture
zhich
each amount Correct your spelling
which
of
39% and 32% respectively. Change preposition
apply
Also
, the domestic use
of water
is slightly different in these two regions
where North America
use
13% zhich
is 2% lesser than that of Correct your spelling
which
the
Correct article usage
apply
Europe
.
Contrarily, in South America
, Africa
, Central Asia
and South East Asia
, at least 71% of water
is used for agriculture
. While
South America
used 19% of water
for domestic purpose
, Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
Africa
, Central Asia
and South East Asia
used no more than 9% of the water
for the same use
. Finally
industrial Add a comma
,Finally
use
of water
varies a lot across these four regions
precisely 5% for Central Asia
, 7% for Africa
, 10% for South america
, and 12% Change the capitalization
America
South
East Change preposition
for South
Asia
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, industry, agriculture, use, regions, america, europe, africa, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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