the chart below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following pie chart
illustrate
the proportion of Change the verb form
illustrates
water
used for different needs namely : Use synonyms
industry
, Use synonyms
agriculture
, and domestic Use synonyms
use
in six Use synonyms
regions
of the world. Use synonyms
Water
usage varies a lot across Use synonyms
regions
. Use synonyms
For instance
, in North Linking Words
America
and Use synonyms
Europe
, Use synonyms
zater
is mainly used for Correct your spelling
water
later
industry
Use synonyms
while
in Linking Words
Africa
, South East Use synonyms
Asia
, Central Use synonyms
Asia
and South Use synonyms
America
Use synonyms
water
is mainly used for Use synonyms
agriculture
.
In Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Europe
53% of Add a comma
,Europe
water
is used for Use synonyms
industry
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, North Linking Words
America
uses 5% less Use synonyms
water
compared Use synonyms
for
their Change preposition
to
industry
. But North Use synonyms
America
uses more Use synonyms
water
than Use synonyms
Use synonyms
europe
for Change the capitalization
Europe
agriculture
Use synonyms
zhich
each amount Correct your spelling
which
of
39% and 32% respectively. Change preposition
apply
Also
, the domestic Linking Words
use
of Use synonyms
water
is slightly different in these two Use synonyms
regions
where North Use synonyms
America
Use synonyms
use
13% Use synonyms
zhich
is 2% lesser than that of Correct your spelling
which
the
Correct article usage
apply
Europe
.
Contrarily, in South Use synonyms
America
, Use synonyms
Africa
, Central Use synonyms
Asia
and South East Use synonyms
Asia
, at least 71% of Use synonyms
water
is used for Use synonyms
agriculture
. Use synonyms
While
South Linking Words
America
used 19% of Use synonyms
water
for domestic Use synonyms
purpose
, Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
Africa
, Central Use synonyms
Asia
and South East Use synonyms
Asia
used no more than 9% of the Use synonyms
water
for the same Use synonyms
use
. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Finally
industrial Add a comma
,Finally
use
of Use synonyms
water
varies a lot across these four Use synonyms
regions
precisely 5% for Central Use synonyms
Asia
, 7% for Use synonyms
Africa
, 10% for South Use synonyms
Use synonyms
america
, and 12% Change the capitalization
America
South
East Change preposition
for South
Asia
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, industry, agriculture, use, regions, america, europe, africa, asia with synonyms.
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