some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History.
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history
in school is essential while some believe that in this
modern world more and more science
and technology
lessons should be added in class curriculum because they are more valuable than history
. In the following essay we are going to have a look on
both the views and what is my personal opinion.
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history
is considered as the most significant school subject in comparison to the others because history
has the potential to portrait
the things we have survived in our past and show young children that how far mankind have developed because of our ancestor.
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also
plays any very crucial part in a person's life
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