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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services. To what extent do you agree with this statement ?

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While some people believe that
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 purchase in the arts,
such
 as music, theatre and visual profession is
gain
Suggestion
gaining
 less benefits and
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
investment
 in public
service
 must
gain
 more benefits. From my point of view, I agree with
this
 idea for many reasons, described in the following essay.
To begin
 with, I strongly believe that
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
investment
 in public
service
 must
gain
 a
lot
 of benefit.
First
,
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,
I believe that the amount of people who like and enjoy doing art is less than the amount of the people in the
country
 while most people in the
country
 have to use public
service
.
Therefore if
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Therefore, if
goverment
Suggestion
the government
government
 invests in public
service
 it will help a
lot
 of people in many other ways.
Second
, Arts is very detail in every trivial of a piece and it will use a
lot
 of money to invest until it can be seen that it is beneficial.
In addition
, every
investment
 have risk and I believe
investment
Suggestion
an investment
 in the arts is at the level of very high risk because it will not
gain
 a
lot
 of praise to the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 and
country but
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country, but
 it will
gain
 a
lot
 of praise, money and fame to the artist who create the art.
Although
 the money that the artist used to create art is from the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 and many people's tax while invest in public
service
 every person in the
country
 will get what their tax paying for, and that improve the quality of the person's life. To conclude, I strongly agree with
this
 statement the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 must invest in public
service
 for every person in the
country
 with a low risk level of the
investment
.Everyone will get benefit from their tax that they pay to
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 to work as an organization that manage and improve the quality of life for the people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural enrichment
  • expression of creativity
  • promote diversity
  • enhance social cohesion
  • boost tourism
  • job creation
  • stimulate economic growth
  • improve quality of life
  • essential services
  • maintenance and development
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