Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services. To what extent do you agree with this statement ?

While some people believe that

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

purchase in the arts,

such

as music, theatre and visual profession is

gain

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gaining

less benefits and

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

investment

in public

service

must

gain

more benefits. From my point of view, I agree with

this

idea for many reasons, described in the following essay.

To begin

with, I strongly believe that

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

investment

in public

service

must

gain

a

lot

of benefit.

First

,

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,

I believe that the amount of people who like and enjoy doing art is less than the amount of the people in the

country

while most people in the

country

have to use public

service

.

Therefore if

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Therefore, if

goverment

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the government

government

invests in public

service

it will help a

lot

of people in many other ways.

Second

, Arts is very detail in every trivial of a piece and it will use a

lot

of money to invest until it can be seen that it is beneficial.

In addition

, every

investment

have risk and I believe

investment

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an investment

in the arts is at the level of very high risk because it will not

gain

a

lot

of praise to the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

and

country but

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country, but

it will

gain

a

lot

of praise, money and fame to the artist who create the art.

Although

the money that the artist used to create art is from the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

and many people's tax while invest in public

service

every person in the

country

will get what their tax paying for, and that improve the quality of the person's life. To conclude, I strongly agree with

this

statement the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

must invest in public

service

for every person in the

country

with a low risk level of the

investment

.Everyone will get benefit from their tax that they pay to

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

to work as an organization that manage and improve the quality of life for the people.