Rising university fees and scare employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment do you agree or disagree? GIVE REASONS FOR YOUR ANSWER AND INCLUDE ANY RELEVANT EXAMPLE FROM YOUR OWN KNOWLEDGE OR Experience

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University

education

has always been expensive, but the recent years have not only seen a continuous increase in its fees, but

also

a greater decrease in the employment rate of graduate students.

This

has led some people to support the idea that, universities should only teach practical degree courses and completely abolish all arts subjects. I completely disagree with

this

opinion and

this

essay will discuss the reasons for

such

a viewpoint.

Firstly

, to believe that arts subjects are not as good for the career formation as practical degree courses is an incorrect assumption in itself. There are myriad of career options for arts graduates; like that of a counsellor, psychologist, archaeologist, and historian to name but a few.

Thus

arts graduates are equally competent with graduates of any other stream as far as professional front is concerned.

Furthermore

, entirely eliminating arts courses from university

education

will be unfair for the people who have a greater interest in

this

stream and wish to attain the highest possible degree in it. For an illustration the results of a poll conducted, by a local NEWS channel, over several colleges across Europe showed that, 70% of students who opted for arts over other subjects, did so because of interest rather than any other reason.

Thus

, showing that removing

this

field to be unjust and unethical. To conclude,

this

essay argued why it is wrong and unethical to remove arts subjects from university

education

and how these are an indispensable part of any

education

system.

Thus they

Accept comma addition

Thus, they

should be retained forever.

Thu Apr 30 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

257 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

well-rounded education
critical thinking
innovation
cultural heritage
market forces
employability
educational diversity
practical degree courses
adaptability
long-term effects
societal impact
cultural enrichment
job market trends
interdisciplinary approach
fostering creativity

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