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Some people think that teacher should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and what is wrong so that they can behave. Others say that teacher should only teach student academic subjects

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There are different views of many individuals, whether school teachers should teach only academic subjects or they should
also
 educate students about right and wrong in life. I completely argue that we should combine both of factors to create activity enrichment. Academic subject is a basic lesson which lecturer should teach and explain clearly in order to make sure that students will understand it and it is a learning foundation for the future.
For example
, a lecturer who teaches mathematics, has to teach the basic function clearly
also
 how to interpret any kind of calculating parts.
On the other hand
, Sciences will not necessarily guarantee that the students, even if they excel in either of them, they will inherit good morals. So is the teacher’s duty to guide the students about the morality of the world, giving them a better perception about the surrounding realities. In conclusion, both ways of teaching are important parts even though teaching students to judge what is correct, is not necessarily the school teacher’s responsibility, but they should still advise
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 students about ethical behaviour.

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